The original idea here, since I have been complainng about how I was not heeded on dialogue... was that Jon and Karl would each write a comic, then I would put in the dialogue afterwards by myself. Unfortunately, I thought it was obvious that the comics should be normal. This was not the case, and I was presented with COMPLETELY random nonsense by Jonathan. With the promise that Karl's would be even worse mind you. So Jon and I fixed the nonsense and here are the results.

In my defense, I can only say that Mike did not particularly make clear that he wanted a comic that made any sense. He apparently thought that part was implicit. Karl and I took his statement as something of a challenge.

Just sayin'